Tuesday, May 22, 2012

#MenageMonday Week 33 Winner


Wonder of wonders, I won another badge!
Special thanks to
#MenageMonday host @CaraMichaels and to
Week 33 Judge @PhoenixLavan

The Photo: Honoring the annular eclipse I totally missed. Photo courtesy of ABC News.


The Phrase: “[didn't/don't/doesn't] want this”
(you can choose one of the three options and this can appear anywhere in the story)

The Judge’s Prompt: The Phoenix – the bird, the legend, as a symbol, a statue, as an idea, as a concept, or even abstractly as a suggestion or condition.

Here is my Entry:
Though undeniably wrought by my own fiery temper, mental afflictions of my own design, I didn’t want this. I didn’t want anything that even resembled this. I wanted to be a blue angel pilot. I wanted to land jets on an aircraft carrier. And that, just for starters. I wanted to become a lunar astronaut – “One giant leap for mankind”, and all that.
Not by the most incredible misfortune, to be one sitting stupid on some dusty prison exercise yard. This is not my idea of standing out – to be one of only three persons even cognizant of a beautiful eclipse occurring overhead. All there ever was of me was bound up in the idea that I would be significant. I must matter to someone other than myself. My descent has been into the ranks of the aimless.
I wonder how soon into its half- millennium does a phoenix began contemplating rebirth. I am so recently into this life sentence. But, I fear for my sanity if I do not look forward to my release. Though incarcerated from without, I’m fully aware of a fire shut-up within. I have to believe that I will one day fly from this place.
@Computilizer
 200 Words

Saturday, March 31, 2012

#ThursThreads Week 16 Winner

I won my first #FlashFiction writing winner badge, in this week’s #ThursThreads challenge. To be sure, thanks go out to the Dixie Chicks {;-).

Thursday, March 29, 2012

Our Judge for Week 16:
The epic fantasy reading Aussie, Six Sentence Sunday and sci-fi author,



The Prompt: The prompt is a line from the previous week's winning tale.
"Oh yeah it was that big."

Week 16 of #ThursThreads had some great tales! Thanks to all who entered this week. I'm honored to see all of you and read your stories. And it was great to have some returning "faces" join us along with our regulars.
Huge thank you to judge Goran Zidar for reading through all of them.
All of the Entries: Available Here


Goran says: There were so many good, funny, and interesting entries it was hard to come up with just four.
Winners Announcement:
Honorable Mentions

Nancy Porter | @ModernBard1024
Goran says: An excellent way to clear a room, I now want to know what the real discussion is going to be about.
Revo Boulanger | @RevoBoulanger
Goran says: I was totally able to visualise the characters, it was a strong scene done well in such a short passage.
Cara Michaels | @caramichaels
Goran says: As a bit of a sci-fi fan myself, this one left me wanting more... what were these people about to get into.
Week 16 Winner

Judge Goran says: I chose this piece for a couple of reasons. Earl was cast as a tragic hero and there was depth to his character that appealed to me. Despite his huge ego "oh yeah, it was that big" he was brought low by those he believed were his intellectual inferiors... so much for his great size and much vaunted intellect.
Here is my Entry:

There was no halting ambivalence or trepid insecurity in Earl. His humongous feet would tote his massive frame, into even a delicate situation, in the most confident gait. Whatever air not displaced by his immensity would be sucked out of the room by his enormous ego. Oh yeah, it was that big.  I guess it would have been easy to imagine arrogance as the root cause of his present predicament.

Earl was bound by four chains, spread eagle and on display, in the great hall of the Vicor. He had strode right up to the elders, denouncing any intellectual heft in their recent decisions, and accusing them of caring more for the appearance of governing than actual governance. This had not been the first time that Earl had berated the council. But, it would be his last.

Earl’s impassioned oratory and gestures had been made illegal in less publicized edicts of the elders. That’s right, Earl had been trapped. Although the current elders lacked the cognitive abilities of their predecessors, their authority was absolute. They would make an example of this overbearing man. Ironically, the source of his greatest strength would work to precipitate his demise. Earl had to die.

200 words
@Computilizer

Tuesday, March 13, 2012

#MenageMonday Week 25 Judge’s Pet

Talk about lucky day, I won my first writing badge in this week’s #MenageMonday #FlashFiction challenge.


    
Our Judge for Week 25:

Reader, mommy, teacher, indie, eclectic, social media addict, and author of The Dusk Gate Chronicles

Challenge Time!
Your mission, should you choose to accept it:

The Photo:

The Phrase: “you’re joking”
The Judge’s Prompt: Saluting the Irish and drunken souls everywhere this week, in honor of St. Patrick’s Day, the prompt theme is: a lucky day (however you choose to interpret luck)

On to the Winners!

Breeana Says: This week was definitely hard to judge — lots of great entries, and it put me right in the St. Patrick’s Day spirit! I could have given a lot more than three Honorable Mentions, and picking a winner was HARD!

There were so many fantastic contributions this week, definitely worth taking the time to read. I didn’t have time to write comments for every story, but every single one was enjoyable.
§  - bethwood77 – Loved the imagery of the little girl, and very lucky, indeed.
§  @wendyreid2 – a smell “like animated death” — I’ll have that one in my mind for awhile.
§  @Love_Kenzie – loved the “green eyes laughing” I was right there in the moment.
§  @caramichaels – Awesome character development in just those few words.
§  @JenD_Author – Very creepy, loved it!
§  @charitygirlblog – I loved the twist on the folktale here — the revenge on the goats! Awesome!
Congratulations and great job, everyone!

Honorable Mentions
Miranda Boers|@PurpleQueenNL
Breeana Says: Loved the way the story drew me in, and the twist ending was fantastic.
J.M. Blackman|@J_M_Blackman
Breeana Says: Loved the action, done very nicely!
Siobhan Muir|@SiobhanMuir
Breeana Says: I’d like to run into that “damn Irishman” myself.

Week 25 Judge’s Pet
Robert Mahone|@Computilizer

Breeana Says: ”luck” indeed to be “beguiled right out of one’s boxers and into a drainpipe”
I laughed out loud.

There it was. The same impish smile, that had beguiled him right out of his boxers and into that drainpipe, was now flashing broadly his way.
Thirty-five years had not only made her more beautiful, but added confidence to an already unencumbered spirit.

Week 25 Champ

Nancy Porter|@ModernBard1024
Breeana Says: For a fun, very Irish creepy tale, perfect for this week.
“This is a load of crap, Sean. You’re joking, it’s getting dark, and we’re gonna get in trouble.”
“No, stand right… here. See, an important part of the magic is the image. And if you stay right there, look. See her shoulders, her head, her dress? That’s her prison. Tilt your head.”
Blake gave a long-suffering harumph and looked at the bridge, canting his head precisely as instructed. “Huh. Okay, yeah, I do see it.”
“Okay, now say it, just like I told you.” Sean stepped back.
As the sun sank to the horizon, Blake began. Bringing a woman out of the fae realm, huh? Right. This was gonna be his lucky day? Right. “Aiobheann, Aiobheann… I summon ye from the realm between day and night, free ye from bondage, chains struck by suitable trade, to love as ye will.” He put a sacrificial bagel on the rock at his feet.
The sunset gave a brief flash and both men vanished. On the bank, a slender redhead smoothed her shift, breathing free air for the first time in centuries. She looked over her shoulder at the very subtly changed shape of the bridge and creek. “Have a lovely eternity, boys.”

Here is my Entry:

“Remember this?”
No sense feigning surprise. Jeff had thought of nothing else, since they’d first turned onto Dewey Lane. Kathy, had piqued both his curiosity and excitement, when she’d first suggested leaving the reunion to “Check something out”, as she put it.
 “Of course! Who could forget the location of the end of the rainbow?”
 “The location? What about the pot of gold?”
There it was. The same impish smile, that had beguiled him right out of his boxers and into that drainpipe, was now flashing broadly his way. Thirty-five years had not only made her more beautiful, but added confidence to an already unencumbered spirit.
“Well, I guess you were pretty, and lucky, back then.”
“That’s blarney. However, if you left your luck with your youth, I guess this time I’ll be making the trip alone.”
And, without the slightest hesitation, Kathy unbuckled, pulled down, and begin stepping out of her jeans.
“You’re joking.” Jeff laughed.
“Pot of gold” trailed after her as she started down the embankment, tossing her bra back over her shoulder.
Maybe a little late getting started, but Jeff could only smile as he saw his boxers land by her panties at the water’s edge.

@Computilizer
200 Words

Check out all of this week’s offerings here, and be sure to come back next #MenageMonday!

Thursday, January 26, 2012

#Nightgale Week 4 Response

Week 4 of 4 – January 26th – PROMPT: Writing is Immortality

Keats – “But on the viewless wings of Poesy, Though the dull brain perplexes and retarts: Already with thee! Tender is the night, And haply the Queen-Moon is on her throne;”(Ode To A Nightingale)

For my WIP (work in progress) – Mighty Men
Rather than continue to reveal details of my script, I’ve decided make my final entry in this challenge an ode by David to his mighty men.

Ode to My Mighty Men
the chief seat of our mighty team
occupied by Hachmonite Jashobeam,
whether eight or three, Adino’s spear
dispatched hundreds of foes despising fear

by his side and mine e'er wielding Eleazar
whose sword slashed like a mighty razor
tirelessly smiting till his hand did cleave
enemies felled beyond belief

last attained unto the chief three
Shammah the Hararite son of Agee
for he also braved the barley field
to prove our God would never yield

are not these written on sacred scrolls
and upon the hearts of men?
immortal deeds fond to behold
                whilst overcoming sin.

beyond these chief another three
cast honor o’er the mighty sea
first Abishai, son of Zeruiah
then captain of the guard Benaiah

these three of the thirty chief
went down to spell my soul’s relief
in jeopardy of their very lives
no leader could their deed despise

howbeit, the reckoning doth fail
inconsistent in its very tale
for despite the glorious act and fame
opprobrium attaches to one name

are not these written on sacred scrolls
and upon the hearts of men?
forever affixed to lives retold
                the consequence of sin.

thirty more in Adullam began to dwell:
third son of Zeruiah, Asahel
also birthed in Bethlehem
even Dodo’s son Elthanan.

Shammah and Elika both Harodite
Helez and Ahijah fighting Pelonite
Ira of Tekoa, Abiezer of Anathoth
giant-slaying Sibbecai son of Hushath

Ahohite Zalmon, called Ilai
Netophathites Heled and Maharai
from Benjamin in Gibeah Ithai
Benaiah the Pirathonite and Hurai

are not these written on sacred scrolls
and upon the hearts of men?
iron sharpening iron can make men bold
                while camped outside is sin.

Abiel and Azmaveth, and Eliahba of Shaalbon
Gizonite son of Hashem another mighty Jonathan
Hararites Shammah and Sacar’s son Ahiam
Ur descendant Eliphal and wisdom’s son Eliam

Carmelite Hezro, Arbite Paarai, Igal of Zobah
Bani the Gadite aka Haggeri’s son Mibhar
even from Ammon Zelek and Naharai the Beerothite
and valiant Ira and Garab of the people Ithrite

of all the mighty men thus fallen
one name will ever be calling
indeed my sin was brought to light
for the blood of Uriah the Hittite.

are not these written on sacred scrolls
and upon the hearts of men?
the genesis of our immortal souls
                demands our death to sin. 


384 words
@Computilizer

Special thanks to Stevie McCoy @theglitterlady for establishing the #NightGale Challenge. During this challenge, my sequences and script outline have come sharply into focus. Interjecting immortality as an underlying theme has provided a hinge for more than one instance of backstory. I apologize for not having noticed the “200 words” in the challenge description. I suspect that I may have been confusing @CaraMichaels coaxing in her #WIP500 challenge. But, I can gratefully say that my Mighty Men script has swollen to over 15,000 words. I am completing my final scenes, and look forward to rewriting the whole dang thang.

Again, thank you Stevie. And, thank you to all who have provided such encouraging comments.

                                                         FADE TO BLACK.


Tuesday, January 24, 2012

Putting Sundance reviews of RED HOOK SUMMER in Perspective

What I’ve done here is to weed through all of the piling on that has taken place in the blogs and reviews, and I present here an index for you to take a look at what has been said about what I expect to be a great film of 2012.

I’ve broken the chatter into four groups of representative articles.

The Good        – these are reviews that support Spike Lee  and James McBride’s effort
The Bad          – these would be mixed reviews (having compliments and criticisms)
The Ugly         – these are the reviewers who were simply disappointed with the film
The Q & A       – because people are talking about the post screening session

I have provided links (below) to the source reviews of the day with excerpts which represent the writer’s essential comments. The only other thing that I have included is the number of twitter followers of these critics. You can scroll down this page to simply get the flavor of the reviews, or you can follow the links.  I have no intention of adding any commentary of my own, other than, “Don’t believe the hype!”

The Good

Los Angeles Times 24 Frames     Jan 23, 2012 2:13pm          | by Steven Zeitchik  3934

Sundance 2012: Spike Lee made 'Red Hook' because Hollywood wouldn't

“It was one of the most difficult scenes I’ve ever done,” Lee acknowledged on Monday. “But I knew it had to be done. It would have been cowardly and gutless and punkish to not deal with it straight on”
Spike Lee's Red Hook Summer is his most interesting/ambitious film in yrs, tho the last section will be polarizing.

MovieNation                                     Jan 23, 2012 07:49 PM       | by Ty Burr  1402

                Sundance 2012 Day 5: Get the 'Hook'

I didn't need to hear Spike Lee's post-screening rant … to appreciate how hard the movie struggles to get the flavors, rhythms, music, and emotions of a neighborhood and a society the movie industry has no interest in depicting with any realism.

I also appreciated the parts of "Red Hook" that work, specifically the evocation of a still-vibrant community in an economic and social squeeze. This is a movie that's best when it's at its most overtly poetic.

New York Post                                  Jan 23, 2012 12:17 AM      | by LOU LUMENICK   830
                Sundance: Spike Lee's 'Red Hook Summer' packs a punch

the film turns out to be Lee's most powerful and controversial narrative feature in years.

The grandfather, brilliantly played by Clarke Peters, is a fire-and-brimstone preacher at a small black church who tries to inspire a fear of God in his non-believer grandson (Jules Brown),

Salon.com                                           Jan 23, 2012 12:10 PM EST | by Andrew O'Hehir    2940

Spike Lee takes Sundance by storm with “Red Hook Summer”


Do Lee and co-writer James McBride (a Red Hook native) really have to include three fire-breathing, social-gospel sermons by Bishop Enoch? No, not for narrative reasons — but they’re so awesome, so tragic, so heart-rending and so inspirational I never wanted them to stop.

This is an unpolished, loosey-goosey, street-level film that surely isn’t for everybody. It’s also a passionate, painful, tragic, haunting love letter to Brooklyn and New York City, to black America and the black church, to the possibility of childhood innocence in rough circumstances. I found it tremendously moving, and the memory of that premiere screening is one I will long treasure, cuss words and all.

Slant Magazine                                 Jan 23, 2012 at 11:47 pm   | by Simon Abrams  480

Sundance Film Festival 2012: Red Hook Summer and Smashed

It takes a little time to get used to the sprawling scope and the blocky dialogue of Red Hook Summer

Lee and McBride have created a new microcosm of uncertainty and shaky hopefulness and it's a shambling, wonderful mess.

Red Hook Summer is set in a rich, thriving world that has both the potential to self-destruct and to be rejuvenated by its community leaders. It's a rousing drama and certainly Lee's most hopeful since 9/11.

SunFiltered                                        Jan 23, 2012                         | by Matt Singer 6755

The Sundance Review Revue: Spike Lee’s RED HOOK SUMMER

the film was as divisive as any that’s played at Sundance ’12 so far

Andrew O’Hehir from Salon called it a “very special movie” and said that while some of his colleagues wanted Lee to trim RED HOOK SUMMER by half an hour, he completely disagreed, writing “They simply don’t like what Lee’s trying to do here, and that’s fair enough. But RED HOOK SUMMER, like Lee’s other personal, Brooklyn films, isn’t about telling a story. It’s about capturing a mood and a moment, a place and its people. It’s about heart and soul, and whatever its flaws, this film has those things in abundance.”

With some Sundance movies, negative or even mixed reviews are a bad sign. Not here. To me, the variety of responses to RED HOOK SUMMER means Lee is back where he belongs: exploring new territory, saying what other directors won’t, and pushing some (mother_*king) buttons.

The Bad (mixed)

Chicago Tribune - Variety            Jan 23, 2012                         | by Peter Debruge  1298

Red Hook Summer

As Flik interacts with his new neighbors, Lee presents personalities so colorful and richly conveyed that by the end of the film, we feel we've known them our entire lives.

The movie meanders, which fans accustomed to Lee's more conventional work may find frustrating, and yet, there's a method to its seemingly loose form.

Cinema Blend.com                         Jan 23, 2012 10:15:30        | by Katey Rich 4384

Spike Lee Brings Brooklyn To Sundance In Shaggy But Powerful Red Hook Summer

Red Hook Summer chases dozens of thematic ideas but only really nails a handful of them.

there were walkouts but also standing ovations, and tweeted reactions that claimed it was everything from a return to form to one of the worst things that ever premiered at Sundance

But nobody tells Brooklyn stories the way Lee does, and for all the fat in the movie that ought to be trimmed, there's enough powerful stuff in there to make the case that Lee's New York is a place worth visited.

Fourth Row Center                         Jan 23, 2012                         | by Jason Bailey  380

#Sundance Review: "Red Hook Summer"

Red Hook Summer is part of a body of work, a growing filmography preoccupied with certain places and ideas.

is not a great film. But it is an interesting one, and it has moments of greatness.

The direction Lee goes in simply won’t play for some audiences—it’s both risky and more than a little derivative … But it worked for this viewer.

EW.com Inside Movies                 Jan 23, 2012 01:49 AM ET | by Anthony Breznican                3263

Sundance 2012: Inside Spike Lee's shocking, ranting 'Red Hook Summer' premiere

Noah Cowan, tweets via @NoahLightBox: “Red Hook Summer: Now THAT’s a complex text.         2 acts of sweet homily + 1 of anticlerical terrorism. And a Bruce Hornsby score!”   2027

@andohehir: “Spike Lee’s RED HOOK SUMMER is a passionate, painful love letter to Brooklyn, NYC, black America & the black church. Very special movie.”  2941

theGuardian uk                                                Jan 23, 2012 16.21 EST       | by Damon Wise  2030

Sundance 2012: Red Hook Summer – review

For start it is so very long – a whopping 130 minutes, ... For another thing, it is loud.

In a single jaw-dropping 10 or 15 minute stretch, Peters' performance spins on a dime, and for a short time the old Spike is with is: tender, sharp, smart – but above all dramatic. This nirvana doesn't last long but it proves that Lee can do it if he tries. For the most part, though, this bloated, flapping, directionless weather balloon of a film is simply trying

Indiewire SUNDANCE REVIEW  Jan 23, 2012                         | by Eric Kohn    4621

Why 'Red Hook Summer' Is Both Spike Lee's Weakest and Most Sincere Work In Years

lack of a filter helps make the noticeably low-budget effort into an earnest, occasionally powerful work, but also one routinely afflicted by sloppiness.

Lee's ode to life in the projects contains a handmade, DIY spirit that keeps the movie honest and heartfelt despite many cracks in its design.

A stunning final montage takes the movie in a profound direction and brings the vitality of the setting into sharp focus, proving that even a weak Spike Lee joint is better than no Spike Lee joint at all.

ScreenDaily                                        Jan 23, 2012                         | by David D'Arcy

Red Hook Summer

Lee’s beloved Brooklyn is a mix of nurturing and violence, yet in this film it also seems a place worth escaping. Lee’s ode to Red Hook is often perplexing

A filmmaker in transition, Lee is asking questions. Like any transitional work, Red Hook Summer also shows its seams.

The Ugly

Brooklyn Heights Blog                   January 23, 201210:32 am                | by Chuck Taylor

Spike Lee’s “Red Hook Summer” Sinks At Sundance


EW.com Inside Movies                 Jan 23, 2012 12:49 PM ET | by Owen Gleiberman 1186

Sundance: In 'Red Hook Summer,' Spike Lee does the wrong thing

Red Hook Summer has some great gospel numbers, but aside from that, it’s a messy, disorganized dud, and not just because it lacks structure. What it’s missing is a moral center we can fasten on to.

EW.com Inside Movies                 Jan 23, 2012 01:49 AM ET                 | by Anthony Breznican                3263

Sundance 2012: Inside Spike Lee's shocking, ranting 'Red Hook Summer' premiere

by ComingSoon.net’s @WkndWarriorCS: “Spike Lee’s Red Hook Summer joins Hounddog, Downloading Nancy and [The Informers] as one of the worst movies to ever premiere at #sundance.”                                                                                                        137

Erik Childress of efilmcritic.com tweets: “I have so many negative things to say about Spike Lee’s RED HOOK SUMMER that I don’t know where to begin.”                               2095

Moments later, stunned by the out-of-nowhere twist, yours truly tweets via @Breznican: “Okay, so Red Hook Summer ISN’T a coming-of-age movie. It’s a what-the-hell?!? movie.”

The Hollywood Reporter             Jan 23, 2012 | by

Red Hook Summer: Sundance Film Review

Spike Lee’s sermonizing new film is too chaotic (and) a strange, unruly beast of a movie,

rambles through almost two hours of unfocused drama, burdened with endless didactic editorializing, before lurching out of nowhere into ugly revelations and violence.

a dig at Tyler Perry.

The Q & A

Sundance Film Festival Q&A      Jan 23, 2012 04:01 PM       | by Eric Hynes   506

Spike Lee Returns to Sundance (and His Old Brooklyn Stomping Ground) with Red Hook Summer

The look and feel you gave to the film was absolutely brilliant. You brought us into the neighborhood, it felt so real


The Hollywood Reporter  Q&A Jan 20, 2012 8:00 AM PST | by Stacey Wilson   93

Sundance 2012: Spike Lee Talks 'Red Hook Summer,' His Feature Debut at the Festival (Q&A)


AceShowbiz                                       Jan 24, 2012 01:56:53 GMT

Spike Lee on 'Red Hook Summer' Rant at Sundance: I Don't Condemn Hollywood


IMDb     Red Hook Summer(2012)


Rolling Stone                                     Jan 20, 2012 2:30 PM ET    | by Dan Hyman 117

Spike Lee Makes Musical Discovery for 'Red Hook Summer'



 
Interesting, eh?

Bob Mahone



This weekend I flew to New Jersey to visit with three of my children and three of my grandchildren, and especially to watch the NFC Championship game with my son. I am a Giants fan, so I am very happy today. And, though I was very excited about the premier of the new Spike Lee Joint – Red Hook Summer, I did not get to follow any of the chatter from the Sundance Film Festival  because I spent Monday at the Atlantic City airport (sans Internet access) waiting to catch a flight back to Florida. So imagine my surprise when I logged in and started checking reviews once I was home.  Now, I am nobody of significance, so I do not want you to think that I am espousing any movie critic expertise.  What I am is a movie-goer who would like a fair review to help me with my spending choices. I am also a computer programmer who knows how to synthesize mounds of data.

Admittedly, these counts do not reflect the audience that has seen these reviews, given the publications where many of the reviews appear. But, I believe that they are significant when compared to the nearly 170,000 twitter followers of Mr. Lee.